To improve my Retropops box design and advert I have listed things I would like to change.
The box needs to be bolder/brighter and have a clearer logo, I am also going to play around with the layout. It was suggested in class that perhaps my advert could be black and white so I'm going to experiment with that, also re shooting some parts and getting the audio as best I can!
I want to zone in on the 1950s as a way of focusing on what elements of my design I want to change such a type. There are some great retro and 50s adverts on YouTube which will also be useful with research and redesign.
The 1950's ads that I've looked at are all black and white so there's a strong possibility mine will be too!